Re: Initial Submission - Final Edition for review

[Carol Burt <cburt@2ab.com>]

At 09:38 AM 10/19/98 -0400, you wrote:
>Carol,
>
>
>The submission looks very good. Here are my comments on the text:
>
>p. 7, last paragraph: It should read "... a sequence of strings ..."

changed.  thanks.

>
>p. 7, last sentence of the paragraph under subtitle "Use of CORBA Security
>credentials ...". I think the reason is not that it would violate CORBA
>security, but because a locality constrained object can not be invoked from
>outside of the capsule where that object exist. I suggest to remove the last
>sentence at all. The last but one sentence looks sufficient to me in the
>explanation why Credentials object is not passed.
>
last sentence removed.

>p. 8: In the subtitle "An interface for defining access control rules ...",
>word "Principle" should be replaced with "Principal"
>
changed. thanks.

>p. 9: Under subtitle "How new CORBAmed ...". The sentence beginning with "The
>appendix in Section 6" should read "The appendix in Section 6 of the response
>provides ..."
>
changed.  thanks
>
>Before when can we send you more comments today?
>
I'll take simple editorial changes until 1 pm Central time.  

Carol

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Carol Burt                                             2AB, Inc.
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