Re: Initial Submission - Final Edition for review

[Bart de Greef <degreef@medgrid.philips.com>]

Hi Carol,

 > Please review for accuracy... if I have stuff plain wrong this is more
 > important than any formatting or simple typo stuff at this point.  I found
 > a LOT of left-overs from earlier names of interfaces, methods, and types in
 > the text, but I may not have caught everything.

Finally, I took a moment. Here are some comments, hopefully not too
late.

Bart.
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Minor:

IDL: (p. 27, 30, 46):
  The multiple_access_allowed method takes an AccessDefinitionList as
  first argument, while for access_allowed the AccessDefinition is
  taken apart. I'd suggest to change access_allowed as follows:

	boolean access_allowed(
		in AccessDefinition access_request,
		in AttributeList    attribute_list
	);

  That makes it more consistent with multiple_access_allowed and
  guards against any changes in the structure of AccessDefinition.


p. 29:
  There are methods to set, replace and add evaluators.
  How about one to get or list them:

	PolicyEvaluatorList get_evaluators(
		in ResourceName
	);



Editorial:

p. 10: ... the submission team believes does not believe ...
I believe that should be : ... the submission team does not believe...

p. 10: This discussion will be provided
                            ^^

p. 25: (near bottom) ... modified or controlled by the HRAC.
                                            ^^

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