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Re: Initial Submission - Final Edition for review



Hi,

>p. 25, first sentence under ResourceName: It should read "... a sequence of
>strings ..."
>
changed... 

>p. 25, last but one line on the page: should read "... cannot be modified or
>controlled by ..."

someone else already caught that... it's fixed in my copy.
>
>p. 30, paragraph describing replace_evaluators(). Insert the following
sentence
>(it is almost equivalent to the one from the description of add_evaluators())
>before the last one in the paragraph: "The addition of evaluators to a
>ResourceName which previously had none results in the provided list of
>evaluators being the only evaluators consulted on an access decision." 
>Otherwise, the behavior of replace_evaluators() is underspecified in case
when
>no evaluators are assigned for the resource.
>
fixed.

>p. 30, paragraph describing set_default_combinator(), second line: replace
word
>"applied" with "specified" to preserve consistency with the description of
>apply_combinator() and to avoid possible confusion.
>

changed.

>p. 33, last paragraph: replace DecisionResults with DecisionResultList
>
>
reworded to "..takes the decision results (as a DecisionResultList) ..."
>
>Thank you.
>
Thank you.

Carol
>
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Carol Burt                                             2AB, Inc.
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