RE: Revised submission

["V. Juggy Jagannathan" <juggy@careflow.com>]

Carol et. al:

Super work! Minor nitpick (proof reading comments):

Page 5: My phone number is: 304-296-7535 at Careflow.
Curiously enough, the number shown gets me at CERC :-).

Page 11: says that no modification necessary for existing CORBAmed - what
about
revisions proposed for PIDS?

Page 19: Has a [To do] statement.

Page 22: bottom of page talks about.. "the final submission may..."

Page 29: for the "PatternNotRegistered" exception, the phrase "is thrown"
repeated.

Page 30: 2nd line, "assoicaition" => misspelt.

Page 30: Description on InvalidPolicy: "made to asscociated" ==> should be
"made to associate"

Page 48: Use case name: "Out patent" should be "Out patient" :-)

Page 53: 2nd  and 3rd method call signature not visible:
	get_policy_decision_evaluators(Resource ?
	get_dynamic_attributes(AttributeList, ResourceName  ??


Did not quite understand the pids modification requirements and the pattern
stuff - i have been out of this
for too long :-)

great work!

- regards
- juggy



> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-hrac-rfp@cs.fiu.edu [mailto:owner-hrac-rfp@cs.fiu.edu]On
> Behalf Of Carol Burt
> Sent: Saturday, February 27, 1999 6:29 PM
> To: hrac-rfp@cs.fiu.edu
> Subject: Revised submission
>
>
> Hi,
>
> Attached is the revised submission and IDL.  I am sending the
> word document
> back to Konstantin directly.  He may need to change the omg
> document number
> on the cover and if you find editorial stuff he can make those changes on
> Monday as I'm flying out to spend the week with a customer and will be
> unavailable all day Monday.
>
> Thanks to everyone for your support during the drafting of the doc.  I'll
> see you in Philadelphia.
>
> Carol
>

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